RichardJones
Active Hunter
Love your build up, so much work goes into getting such a great suit and it really shows!
Couple things i noticed:
1. Rocket tip is too pinkish red. From those promo shots the red/pink color is nearly gone and looks like it was almost dusted on over the masked silver.
2. The boots and dark, but too clean. The reference shots show the boots really beat up. Im seeing browns and white distressing and almost like a worn out old leather boot in the reference.
3. The armor looks a bit shiny. A little bit of matte clear coat goes a long way and really takes the armor from a cartoony look to screen used piece. You can weather with white pencil, sharp pastel and black paint flicked from an old toothbrush over the matte clearcoat.
4. Not sure if you mentioned it, but the jumpsuit seems a bit baggy in the arms and legs. Its pretty tight and tailored on the refrence shots.
5. The jetpack seems too high up on the back armor, and it seems to vertical, letting out a touch more strap from the top of the jetpack harness may help.
Again, awesome work and dedication on this build! My suggestions are striclty meant to help and not meant to be offensive.
Couple things i noticed:
1. Rocket tip is too pinkish red. From those promo shots the red/pink color is nearly gone and looks like it was almost dusted on over the masked silver.
2. The boots and dark, but too clean. The reference shots show the boots really beat up. Im seeing browns and white distressing and almost like a worn out old leather boot in the reference.
3. The armor looks a bit shiny. A little bit of matte clear coat goes a long way and really takes the armor from a cartoony look to screen used piece. You can weather with white pencil, sharp pastel and black paint flicked from an old toothbrush over the matte clearcoat.
4. Not sure if you mentioned it, but the jumpsuit seems a bit baggy in the arms and legs. Its pretty tight and tailored on the refrence shots.
5. The jetpack seems too high up on the back armor, and it seems to vertical, letting out a touch more strap from the top of the jetpack harness may help.
Again, awesome work and dedication on this build! My suggestions are striclty meant to help and not meant to be offensive.
