that turned out gorgeous and as canonly accurate as i can imagine from the writingsand very few references i've seen. i have no doubt that within a day or two you will be an official member at the mmcc!
i really think you should email copies of this to karen traviss. i know she'd appreciate it! if you don't have her email, pm me at mercs and i'll pass it along.
good luck with gettung your bh# for this set. while i have no pull with the 501st, let me know if there's anything i can do to help, be it with reference material or a letter of recommendation, i'm the po at mercs equal to the 501st's lml.
great work buir! welcome to the aliit!